Jack Whittaker Blog Feedback November 2014
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Task
Research and Planning Part 2
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Incomplete/ Limited
0-7 marks
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Basic
8-11 marks
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Proficient
12-15 marks
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Excellent
16-20 marks
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Key scenes
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Key Scene
script
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Basic (tick wont
work)
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Prop List
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Locations
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Filming
key scenes
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Film logo
ideas
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Audience
feedback on logo ideas
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Shot list
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Production
company logo ideas
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Audience
feedback on logo ideas
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WWW:
ü Key
scene 3 shows real strength: you begin to experiment with editing; exploring
more interesting narrative perspective/ audience positioning.
ü Well
done for conducting some independent and innovative additions to the
spreadsheet to develop your research and planning.
ü You
are beginning to add more depth to your posts, which make your work and aims
clearer to an outsider (e.g. external moderator).
ü Excellent
photos added to some posts to enhance your ideas and demonstrate technical
skill.
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EBI:
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Key scene 1 and 2 don’t appear to be key at the moment. Are these scenes
really the most important/ captivating narrative that your film offers? You
need to develop/ improve these. (Why are these different on Max’s blog? Can
you share these?)
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Work needs to be done on your shot list for
your trailer – just 10 shots?
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Try to proof read blog posts to correct basic
SPaG errors e.g. possessive apostrophe in Nathan’s.
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Take more photographs and visuals e.g. props.
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Where are your key scene scripts?
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Pupil Comment:
I think that my work is up to date. I am currently working at a
proficient level. However I would like to get some of my work up to an
excellent level so I can get a good grade. I would also like to get all the ticks out
of basic and into proficient.
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